Comments on: hero! http://www.wat-a-wit.com/2009/04/hero/ redefining rationality Thu, 19 May 2011 17:31:39 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: AKP http://www.wat-a-wit.com/2009/04/hero/comment-page-1/#comment-399 AKP Tue, 07 Apr 2009 18:25:00 +0000 http://wat-a-wit.com/2009/04/hero/#comment-399 @ darwin, I love you! @ Kruttika, yeah actually you are right. I got too lazy at the third stanza (I have this condition you know?) By the way, thank you for the comments and it help me producing better poems or a better world (reduced population would help, wouldn't it?) @all those who read the poem and did not comment, you missed a bottle of beer, huh! By the way guys, I know I suck at poetry, the other day I'd sent another poem to my close friend and the reply came: <strong> you think this is a hit i think it is truck loads of bull shit. this rhymes too</strong> but the good news is that I would not concede, not by jove! @ darwin, I love you!

@ Kruttika, yeah actually you are right. I got too lazy at the third stanza (I have this condition you know?) By the way, thank you for the comments and it help me producing better poems or a better world (reduced population would help, wouldn’t it?)

@all those who read the poem and did not comment, you missed a bottle of beer, huh!
By the way guys, I know I suck at poetry, the other day I’d sent another poem to my close friend and the reply came:

you think this is a hit
i think it is truck loads of bull shit.

this rhymes too but the good news is that I would not concede, not by jove!

]]> By: Kruttika http://www.wat-a-wit.com/2009/04/hero/comment-page-1/#comment-396 Kruttika Tue, 07 Apr 2009 07:05:54 +0000 http://wat-a-wit.com/2009/04/hero/#comment-396 Good one again....the overall rhyme scheme is good...however I felt the last three lines were written keeping the rhyme scheme ONLY in mind...i might be wrong of course...but the poem is really good...well put thoughts...this is one thing everyone thinks of but not everyone manages to write a poem! Good one again….the overall rhyme scheme is good…however I felt the last three lines were written keeping the rhyme scheme ONLY in mind…i might be wrong of course…but the poem is really good…well put thoughts…this is one thing everyone thinks of but not everyone manages to write a poem!

]]> By: darwin http://www.wat-a-wit.com/2009/04/hero/comment-page-1/#comment-388 darwin Mon, 06 Apr 2009 05:11:37 +0000 http://wat-a-wit.com/2009/04/hero/#comment-388 Hey, Nice one... You are on your way to be a great poet... With some more humor/wit you'll be GB Shaw II. Hey, Nice one… You are on your way to be a great poet…

With some more humor/wit you’ll be GB Shaw II.

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